Post by matov on Jul 2, 2010 15:57:40 GMT -5
Just finished listening to all of season 0 (which is a little confusing as I thought you had to start with 1 ?).
First of all I throughly enjoyed it. I thought the attention to detail that you gave to the whole 'Fall' was excellent and how you handled it was incredibly well done. Top marks for that. The inclusion of the UN/NATO unit was a stroke of genius as it gives it something of a different flavour and opens up all sorts of dramatic possibilitys later on. Perhaps some more detail on what is happening the native countrys might be of some interest and their reaction to that news but I assume thats going to become more obvious as the show develops. Oh and loved the script writing for the Scottish fellow. Very dry, very British. Who says you yanks cannot do sarcasm ?
I must admit to finding the use of the words 'dude' and 'whatever' a touch annoying but perhaps put that down to cultural differences.
And I also dont really buy into the lead characters in the actual HG world complex. They annoy me from reasons that I find hard to articulate and I struggle to find their response to the situation as having any credibility BUT I also wonder if thats part of your attempt to portray how people involved in a very corporate structure might respond so I am willing to give the benefit of the doubt on that one.
Overall 8 out of 10 for me. A great effort and I can only imagine things getting better.
The only thing that I never really got was the whole after show party thing. But once again, it might say more about me than it does about you all.
First of all I throughly enjoyed it. I thought the attention to detail that you gave to the whole 'Fall' was excellent and how you handled it was incredibly well done. Top marks for that. The inclusion of the UN/NATO unit was a stroke of genius as it gives it something of a different flavour and opens up all sorts of dramatic possibilitys later on. Perhaps some more detail on what is happening the native countrys might be of some interest and their reaction to that news but I assume thats going to become more obvious as the show develops. Oh and loved the script writing for the Scottish fellow. Very dry, very British. Who says you yanks cannot do sarcasm ?
I must admit to finding the use of the words 'dude' and 'whatever' a touch annoying but perhaps put that down to cultural differences.
And I also dont really buy into the lead characters in the actual HG world complex. They annoy me from reasons that I find hard to articulate and I struggle to find their response to the situation as having any credibility BUT I also wonder if thats part of your attempt to portray how people involved in a very corporate structure might respond so I am willing to give the benefit of the doubt on that one.
Overall 8 out of 10 for me. A great effort and I can only imagine things getting better.
The only thing that I never really got was the whole after show party thing. But once again, it might say more about me than it does about you all.